Thursday, September 22, 2011

The First Day In The United State

    I love The United State. I have been living in Chicago for 13 years, but I still remember the first day that I arrived here. It was 8th, July 1998. As a new immigration, I needed to be interviewed by the immigration office. I was so afraid that the officer would  as interrogated me as a guilty, because most of the officer would do it in China at that time. My English was so poor that I didn't know how to handle my interview. When I faced to the officer, all of my worry had gone. The officer was very nice and patient to me. He talked to me with his action language for helping me to understand, and help me to take the file that it was needed. At the end, he welcame me to The U.S. heartfelt. I am so glad for living in The U.S.

The Redeye journal 2

This Redeye for this week is very boring and the only thing that has a little bit funny was the news about the Facebook make some changes in the Thursday, September 22.But that have nothing I would interesting about Facebook make a changes. Of course anytime Facebook make any changes will make a very big different for the people who using the new thing that Facebook make the changes with. That doesn't matter about me, I just still ueing the old style of the Facebook like I was use the Facebook first time.Is that the important thing to make a news?Stop it man.

New Facebook features focus on music, TV

2:40 p.m. CDT, September 22, 2011
Facebook unveiled new features that center on the way users listen to music and watch TV as it attempts to make media an integral part of its service.
I think this service is good for us ,more and more people watch movies online,we dont need to download movies and music,and we can see anywhere if you have laptop。

Redeye Journal 2

1. Page number: 33

2. Date published: Thursday september 22, 2011

3. Author’s name:los angeles times

4. Title of the article:The eyes have it, girl

5. A summary of the article (3 - 5 sentences):
women who wear eyeliner and mascara know how difficult it is to find an efficient, effective way to get it all if at the end of the day, especially because it is such a pain taking that extra step of using a separate eye makeup remover in addition to a facial cleanser.

6. Your opinion about the article (2 - 3 sentences):
I think this is a good way,let us to learn more. Make themselves more beautiful.

RedEye Journal 2

1. Page number: P47

2. Date published: September 15.2011

3. Author’s name: MCT

4. Title of the article: Sleep Right

5. A summary of the article (3 - 5 sentences):
The article told about sleeping situation to the audience.Overall, one-third adults in America have a bad sleep.Besides that, the clinical expert,Pete Bils suggested keeping comfortable on daily bedtime,for example,one of them is to make the bedroom comfortable for sleeping.second is to stop drinking caffeine at noon,and so on.


6. Your opinion about the article (2 - 3 sentences):
I agree with the author because it's very good for everyone.Sleeping enough is
always very important to keep people healthy body.If you sleep enough as the right
bedtime at nights.you will have a good beginning in the next morning.In addition,I
think people can not drink too much frozen beverage at nights,if you also agree with me,I think you will get a good sleep every day.

red eye journal 2

You can get smart phone for 99.99dollar at the T-mobile store on september 24th.

Every smart phone is on sale.


Man,I emvy young kids because i couldnt have phone when i was lil shawty thats why we used home phone to talking to female friend or girl friend.My mom was hearing lol.

You can also ask girl's number on the street and you can try whatever you want if you have it.

I swear to god ima get it and go to hospital and get nurse number so they gonna take care me after my girl beat me up when she find out haha.


By the way, I-phone 5 is coming.

I dont know if its real or fake so ima keep check it out...Wow this is next generation?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lzsBwnv_dAg

Chicago Bears

I like football,so i like Chicgao Beras.But , At last week, They made me disappointed,Because they lost the game.I understand , losing is really normal,But i hope they can win the games everytimes. At this sundy,Chicago Bears have a home game,they will play with Green Bay .I hate Green Bay,So i hope they can beat them.Good luck!!

If I were a judge

If I were a judge on "Top Chef Just Desserts", I hope whom  Amanda Rockman could make a rustic dessert. She has so much experience for making dessert and working so many different level eatery,so, the rustic dessert was made by Amanda Rockman will be combined original and modern flavor. I will like the newest taste if I were a judge.          

RED-EYE : america's next top model Journal 2





RED-EYE Journal 2


Wednesday. September 21,2011


Page 37Author:(just the poster so doesn't have author name )

Title: AMERICA'S NEXT TOP MODEL

The America's Next Top Model is my favor show. I saw many season of the modeling compete. I am very love winner name is Nicole Fox at the 13th season. Because she has a good personalities. She is the elegant girl i have seen. But this time i want to focus on The all-star season of "America's Next Top Modelin 2011" debuted last night and the major news wasn't the poor hair choices. It was that two former contestants, Bre Scullark and Bianca Golden, moved to Chicago and live together. Another all-star, Kayla Ferrel, has made the leap from Rockford to Chicago. The Second City is no stranger to ANTM -- it's home to some of the show's biggest winners (and losers). If you are interest in this show ,plz follow it. Get more fashion idea and learn more about the pronunciation.



wednesday,september21,2011 redeye
the title:dirty desks!
83% of americans eat at their desk
eating lunch 62%
snacking 50%
eating breakfast 27%
dinner 4%
the article tells about some bad eating habits for americans people during work hours.
opinion:i think that eating habits over (desks,keybaord,mouse,phone) it"s not good and unhealthy so if you do ,make sure you are cleaning your work area every single day.

Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Check this out, babes!



Yo, Yo,Yo.

I dont know if u have read the Redeye today, if u have it, go check page 16.


Omg, Omg, did u see that?? did u see that???


OMG, Did u see that? Jeep, 2011 Wrangler 4x4.

$18,795. omg, $18,795.


i am just telling u guys, if u dont have a car, and u r looking for 1, go to this store with ur DL, drive it around. i give u my word, u r gonna fall in love with it!!!!!!!!!! Boys, buy it now, and take ur girls out!!!!!! Girls, tell u boys to buy it, and take u and ur mama to the Lake!!!!!!!!!!


:D i really think its a good deal!!!! hahahahahahaha.

New CTA?



I read the Redeye this morning, there is a news about CTA on page 9.


City announces plan for cleaning transit stations

Mayor announced a plan that he says will allow the city to clean and repair CTA train stations more efficiently. But its gonna cost $25million using money thats available because of cuts to the CTA bureaucracy.


My mama is a big fan of CTA, she is old fashion of course. She really likes the train of chicago, and she knows history about it, she always tells me that the train of chicago is really amazing... ( i was like, F*** yeah, ha, IT IS AMAZING. Slow, Old, Dirty, UNSAFE)


But if they really will clean it up, repair it, i may be going to like it like my mama does. :D And i hope its will be repaired and cleaned, becuase i have to take train to school everyday, i cant drive my car to downtown, the parking is very expensive. So if they really do that, i will thank them, myabe buy some cookies for them. :D


"Redeye, Redeye. Redeye,Redeye." the man who gave me a free Redeye this morning said.

smartphone on sale

september 21
wednesday
page 2o
Every smartphone is on sale.Saturday,September 24th only at a T-Mobile store.
that is a good news.I like the smartphone because it is have a lot skill i could use it.first,if at the night you can't remember how to go back your house don't worries this time if you have smartphone you can sear on online map you just need print your home adress on the map and then you just need follow the line and then go back.if you have a smartphone every bad things to be good things.please enjoy the smartphone.
RED-EYE Journal 2

Wednesday. September 21,2011
Page 9
Author: Chicago Tribune
Title: Super (CTA) Sweep

This article is about Mayor Emanuel announced a plan that the city to clean and repair Cta train stations more efficiently. City workers and private contractors will work tpgether from station to station to complete all the work ar once.Currently, different kinds of workers perform the station repair on different schedules. The wffort will cost about $25 million .
I think this is a great idea that we are goinf to see a better station more for better city under our Mayor. There are a lot of compain about the station for a long time. Such as "all the red line stations are nasty. Blue line ones are creepy. And pretty much all the station elevators smell like pee". We need to take this problem seriously. I am wondering we can have a new clean station after the renewal effort for CTA stations.

Dirty desk

pages: 6-7
Date published: September 21, 2011
Author's  name: Toby Smithson


Summary: 

This article is about eating habits of the desk-bound of Americans. This article stated that 83% of Americans eat at there desk, which brings me to my next point that 45% of men rarely or never clean there work area and alongside women in which 30% are like the men who don't clean there work area or desk. Since that amount of percent of Americans don't clean there work areas, they have more sick days as desktops hide bacteria that can lead to food borne illness. It was said in this article that the average desktop has 100 times more bacteria than a kitchen table. Also 400 times more bacteria than the average seat. 


Opinion:

I think that when people read this article they should be in formed and scared enough to clean there desks or work areas. they should also make it a habit that they will keep this up instead of doing it once or twice  and forgetting about it.

Service restored on Green Line after man killed

September 21, 2011 Red eyes News Paper.
The man got killed by the Green Line in the morning. The person was dead on the tracks just east of Cicero. The Police said that because the person jumped in front of the train, but the reason why he jumped would be a question. CTA spokeswoman said that the train power was shut off in both directions between pulaski and Laramie. Until service resumed shortly after 10 a.m.

second joural - red eye

I read on 21/09/2011. page 6.
The title is Dirty desk .want some keyboard critters with that sandwich? eating on the job can be hazardous to your health . the last time you wiped down your desk and shook crumbs from your keyboard was - yep. that is not good news if you are one of th8 3 percent of us who eat at their desks ,according to a recent survey. and wash your hand .the desktop dinning survey found only half of us say they always wash their hands before eating lunch.
in my opinion. healthy is very important for everyone .
you have good life .

after a year

When the Stuffy Pete wake up the next morning in the hospital ,he find the Old Gentleman,and he is very uncomfortable,Pete swear he will repay to the Old Gentleman, And then he leave the hospital. After a year ,When the thanksgiving day coming,the Old Gentleman still in the same restaurant,and wait Pete. When he seeing Pete, he dont belive his eye ,Pete is not fat ,and he looks like a rich Gentleman.Pete told Old Gentleman, after he leave the hospital ,he spent a lot of time to do work. he getting 3 parttime Job a day ,just beacuse he swear he will repay to the Old Genteman and he successful .The Old Gentleman is very excitement. Pete say he will help with the Old Gentleman to help more and more pool people ,and maintain tradition.after then he will set up a Foundation.He will support the old Gentleman always.

Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Page 83 Question 5.Continue the story a year ater. What has happened to stuffy pete?What has happened to the Gld Gentleman?

One year after the Thanksgiving。Stuffy round a good job, he is no longer poor. But the old Gentleman stil Invited stuffy pete come to the Thanksgiving dinner. This time,they do not go to hospital,because after the last experience to understand each other. But this time is the Stuffy pete to pay the money. They are still committed to them after the convention, each year are to Thanksgiving dinner, They have always maintained friendly relations.

Boy beaten into coma

Redeye page7. Thursday, September 15, 2011.
14-year-old boy was attacked to somebody Tuesday night near his house. he was go to his girlfriend house. Girlfriend found him. He was good student in his school.
Policeman need to find criminal. Goverment manager apply to money for safety. Children are not criminal, they are always victim.

If i am Stuffy Pete

At next morning,i am looking around the room when i wake up.I still remember what happened last night.I think eating is a really happiness,when the feast come,i cannot help myself. But at last night , i just ate too much to stuff myself.One hand, i just want to keep something the same as usual,on the other hand ,i don't want the Old Gentleman disappointed. After that,i have regreted to do it.I stuff mysely and i make the Old Gentleman starvation indirect.I feel really guilty.
hello Corona

NO.2

If I my the Stuffy Pete, when I wake up in the hospital and I know the Old Gentleman in the hospital because he didn't eat for three day.I will go to visit the Old Gentleman and talk to him.I have to thank him do all of this for me . Thans him teach me how to be a person will care about the orher,and tell him the next years Thinksgiving day I will pay the fee of the dinner of Thanksgiving.And also I will ask something about the Old Gentleman himself and talk something about myself.At the end before I leave, I promise I would gave him a very big dinner next year.

Imagine that i am stuff pete

When I wake up in the hospital, I fell like why am I here. So I think over yesterday, think about what was happened. When I was thinking, the nurse come and ask me what is going with you. Do you fell well? Why did you eat that much? And at that time, I didn’t see the old gentleman because there have a Curtain between two beds. So I tell nurse the truth. An old gentleman asks me to eat a big free dinner. And I already ate before, but he did this for nine years. I don’t want to break his tradition, so I eat again. That why I am here. The old gentleman next to him hears it all. I am here for three day no eat and he here for me asks him another big dinner. What am I doing?

continue the story

NO.5
NAME:Bella chen

The thanksgiving day after one year. The Old Gentleman still invited Stuffy Pete come to the thanksgiving dinner. But the different is Stuffy pete is not a kind of pool people anymore. He got a job from Old Gentleman. And after that incident was happened. They getting know of each other. So they would not forget the promise between two of them. The promise is Old Gentlemen and Stuffy Pete have dinner together every year at Thanksgiving day. Finally, the Old Gentlemen said "everyone have to eat the dishes to feel enough". At this moment, Stuffy Pete smile into Old Gentlemen's eyes. Why are they smile? That is a secret from two gentleman.
summary of the story :page 83
stuffy pete is a homeless .every thanksgiving for the last nine years,he has been invited by an old gentleman who takes him to a restaurant,in new york city's union square.this year ,however as stuffy is making his way to his park bench ,two old ladies of ancient family ,stop him,and invite him into their home ,and serve him a splendid dinner.
by the time he reaches his old friend and the old gentleman,he is already stuffed to the gills.what happens after,raises most deepest questions about giving and receiving .who is the real gentleman and who the philanthropist,in the story?

Monday, September 19, 2011

Continue the story a year later.What has happened to Stuffy Pete?What has happened to the Old Gentleman?

(RB P83)

Time's stealed by the fairy.The day of one year later,everyone in town are celebrating for

Thanksgiving Day,and Stuffy Pete, too.At the night of that day,he has a celebration party

at his home that he had ready prepared for a long time.He invites Old Gentleman to join the

celebration.They both have a big bright smile on their face.Stuffy Pete has changed everything

in his life,because he tried to work hard in the pass year,so he isn't a poor guy anymore.

Nowadays,he owns a big store named "Thanksgiving".He wants to appreciate his benefactor,Old

Gentleman.So he ask for Old Getleman working on his store,he give Old Gentleman everything

about living. they even get along well like brothers,they are not lonely anymore.And for them,

every Thanksgiving Day is always unforgettable.

I imagine that i am stufffy pete

0n page 83 . i choose 2
I am stuffy pete .on the next day, when i get up , i am so suprised, why am i in the here? where is it? oh ,my god. the nurse says, sir, you are in the hospital. a miuntes later, he sees the
people , --- old gentleman, he talks with old gentlem an, and talked during 9 years ago about thankgiving day. they both smiled , then, shake hands .
we are be good friend . they say

Countinue the story a year later. what has happened to stuffy pete? what has happen to the old gentleman?

Time is always going fast. A year late. This is a day of the Thankgiving. Stuffy Pete have walk pass through the old gentleman house agians, he still cannot forget about who gave and invite him to the feast in the special holiday everyears. Stuffy Pete starts crying, this is the cold weather at the night. Stuffy Pete knews he would never see the old gentleman again, beacause the old gentleman is already pass away. No one could feel and understand this moment of the Stuffy Pete. Time is always going fast. Stuffy Pete always keeping in mine about maintain tradition. He is not poor anymore, also he become a popular writer in the world. One of his famous book was names "Thank your giving and forever".
Imagine that you are Stuffy Pete. Write about your thoughts the next day when you wake up in the hospital.

I can't imagine how much i ate last night. And how come the Old Gentleman get in the hospital too? i can't believe he hadn't eaten a thing in three days? He hadn't eaten for saved money for last night 's dinner? Then how kind he could be? Did he do that every year just to make me happy? What a great men he is that keep this tradition. Watching his lined on his face, i feel sad about his loneliness. Maybe he really need someone in this special evening to eat dinner with him. But how will he feel about my over-eating? He must be dissapointed. I should go to see him right now. Hopefully he is ok. i shoulld preten that i just ill so get in to hospital. i don't want him to know the truth. He is the one that i very respect in my life.

countinue the story a year later. what has happened to stuffy pete? what has happen to the old gentleman?

next year thanksgiving day, Stuffy pete go to square park at one o'clock. And old gentleman come to him at one 0'clock. old gentleman invite Stuffy pete his house. Give a feast to him because of traditional. But the food is too much. Stuffy pete say to old gentleman. "Let's eat together. If this feast eat together, i will not go to hospital because of overate and you will not go to hospital because of starvation. It's a traditional."

Imagine that you are Stuffy Pete.Write about your though the next day when you make up in the hospital.

When I wake up,I was in hospital the doctor asked me what happen of me.I told him I ate a lot of food so I was spain.Becaus yesterday,it is thinksgiving tradition someone was made the feast for me.I very happy.
before i was treat the old gent man to ate the food,after nine years doing that like me.
when someone hungry but they don't have money,I will be philanthropist to treat them and help pass the trouble time,I want smiling around everybody face,I want they are happiness.
traditional thinksgiving day was teach me how to help each other i just want to help each other,I dont have think a lot.I'm so happy and enjoy that things

Homework- Melissa Sohyun Kim

Imagine that you are Stuffy Pete. Write about your thoughts the next day when you wake up in the hospital.

Imagine that I’m Stuffy Pete. Situation : just wake up in the hospital.

Oh, my god. Why am I still here? I must get out of this hospital. What if old gentle man knows that I overate? Maybe he disdains me. He must be thinks that I’m very greedy person. Maybe he doesn’t treat me anymore. One thing I did great job is I make him happy, right? I deny that I overate. However, it’s true. Because two old women serve me food. It just like parade of Thanksgiving food. Um.. I love that ice-cream. It makes me slobber again. It is great pleasure but I shouldn’t have to eat. It ruins all our tradition. Maybe I shouldn’t have gone there to meet old gentle man. Just one year. Everybody do the mistake. I just pretend I forgot it and next year “Oh, I forgot to meet you.” Well, it doesn’t make sense anymore. He already knows! Doctor must be said something to him. I’m highly sure he said I ate too much food. Anyway, that doesn’t matter anymore. The most important thing is his feeling. I don’t want to see his disappoint face. He treats me 9 years. It’s not easy, isn’t it? I must appreciate his behave. He treats me, this Stuffy Pete. While the other person just ignore and call me as a “HOBO”. He is real gentle man I’ve ever seen.